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Post by Broken hope on Nov 26, 2004 21:18:16 GMT -5
a tear wont fall from your eye and tonight i promise not to die but promises are easy to break especially when my lifes at stake
sometimes we hate and sometimes we love other times we say its his fault above we are the liars, we are the dead sometimes we stop it with the words that we said
too many words too many lines one more cut on this wrist of mine these are the reasons this is the pain this is my arm bleeding your name
but i promised a tear wouldnt fall from your eyes and i promised tonight i wouldn't die i told you when we met that i was a liar at heart sometimes we promise not to forget when we do from the start
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Post by cherryXchapstick on Nov 27, 2004 17:45:17 GMT -5
i love that last stanza. beautiful.
great write.
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Post by alostandbrokensoul on Nov 29, 2004 18:32:42 GMT -5
this is awesome you a great poet!!! [imghttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v520/bleedinginside/1e2dce7b.gif[/img]
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Wickedblades666
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I Hate Life, but i am stuck in it by my own rules: death is for quitters, i dont quit...
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Post by Wickedblades666 on Dec 5, 2004 2:38:02 GMT -5
wow, i just love a good suicide poem, especially when you get into the mind frame of the moment, the reasons, and the futility of life...i also enjoy 'em because through someone elses pain i feel better about myself... and saying that...i feel real good about myself right now, so i would like to thank you for writing such a d*mn good poem, and i love the tragedy, the self aware of his own flaws...anyway, great poem, keep writing those great poems you keep writing!
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