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Post by alostandbrokensoul on Nov 13, 2004 14:23:40 GMT -5
Sirens rage throughout the night as the start to begin their fight, a single girl covered in sweat not going to live is the bet.
Her head is pounding the pain just wont cease, on the paramedics she's hounding to make it decrease
Now she's lying in a bed no longer suffereing from her head, in the morge, no pain to feel her death just doesn't seem that real.
She holds out her arms to embrace the men, that saved her life but goes through them instead.
She doesnt get it why can't they see her? it just doesn't fit they cant even hear her?
Her parents are crying she thought she was dying, but now she's dead from the tumor in her head.
Time has passed a month or two why a tumor? no one knew.
Her friends moved on they forgot she's gone, her grave sits alone just a coffin and bones.
She stands behind her shallowed grave knowing she was the one that no one could save.
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Nov 18, 2004 7:19:21 GMT -5
the rhyme scheme was a bit jittery, but overall, i enjoyed it. you have a knack for the darkest of dark writes, ALAB.
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Jan 11, 2005 20:27:19 GMT -5
This is dark and deep
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