Loop,knot,tie

[alostandbrokensoul]

All theses smiles
all theses tears
made for you
made from the fears.

The smiles are forced
the tears wont subside
I smile for you
but it wouldnt matter if I died.

Death becomes my saviour
takes away the pain
all the smiles are gone
and the tears the same.

The scars are my souvineres
that I will never lose.
Loop, knot, tie
I hang me from my noose.

[T.J. Barber]

Great poem...I could feel the pain flowing from this piece. It had great flow and it really painted a horrifying picture for me....Great job,

TJ

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

great job again, ALABS. the first time i read this i felt a jittery rhythm, but it kept the piece jagged - as it should be.

rinna

[X x K e l Z x X]

Wow, this is strong, very good

Kelz