sexual abuse

[desecration]

fractures of imperfection
drink a crimson flutter
barely supporting
a lifetime of dreams
starbursts inflame her eyes
as she absorbs the blows
of her worthlessness
with a solitary breath
and a jagged tear
that mutilates her insides
in patterns that reflect
on her skin
footprints of pain
and remnants of curses
already drifted to someone else
on an unforgiving wind
she sighs
and forces bloody eyes
to her captor
before dropping her head
on his command
he likes the scars
and traces them
down and further and beyond
until visible tears
mingle with the rain
a word
breaks through shatters of pain
m u r
no
d e r
please
murder
it’s solid
salvation
and the animal within approves
as the girl dissipates further
into the world of lost dreams
known as regret
he falls into sleep
a great, panting demon
pinning her
she can see the pulsing steel
macabre
and real
how this creature
craves real
while the ghost
thrives solely on fantasy
her blood sheathes it in warmth
pain
awakening her further
there is a sucking sound
and a guttural groan
grating into high shrieks
satisfaction
again
and again
freedom is carved
into fat
random slashes
deep
fearful
and then the bath
in sticky heat
then his final cry of release
as he pulls out of her
and leaves her
alone
and cold
on the inside
in a white room
lined with knives
and deformed nightmares
that will never save her

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

welcome to poetclub, desecration! now i like this, your metaphors were used very well. it flowed very well, too. well done!
x r x

[Mikepoet]

There is another site I go to that the question just came up of whether art must have feelings to be art. This write had deep feelings and was in my opinion art.

[desecration]

thank you

[X x K e l Z x X]

Excellent write, it is horrific and creepy but truly amazing!

[Seth]

So chilling and so very, very deeply consuming. A true, brings-you-to-your-knees-write.
Awesome wording, you've written this extremely well and in such a cool and dark gruesome way. Stellar piece, sends shivers down my spine- the ending was simply breathtaking as was the entire poem.
Brilliant, grim and engrossing write.