poem about a girl

[GPRacer]

I swear I’ve seen it all
Last year when I saw that angel fall
I know she’s from heaven
I just wish it could be
I wish she was hear for me.
Seems she’s not
She got my heart tied in a knot
I asked her to a date,
She promised not to be late.
I asked her to a big school event
She said she wouldn’t repent
I took her out a few times
Spent more than a couple dimes
This girl she’s worth the world to me
I just wish this love could be
I just wish she could feel
She makes all my emotions heal
I just take one look at her face
In my mind she has a specific place
Just thinking of her puts me in a good mood
All these girls in life
I can’t see how one could stand just ONE wife.
But that’s just how it goes
Just gotta be with life as it flows
I can’t handle all these emotions
Each one requires healing by some kinda potion
But this girl you see
Brings out the best in me
I can’t explain the way I feel
Maybe one day I’ll be at a kneel
Sometimes I wish I knew
Why there are soooo few
Of these people we really love
I just can’t tell you more about her
I could cuddle with her like warm fuzzy fur
When I’m with her my mind is free
She is the only thing I see
Visually virtually mentally and physically
She never puts me into a melancholy
With her I’d go to the moon
During summer I’d even wake before noon

[bloodredtears]

hmm..this one has an interesting ending...it would seem abrupt but there really isn't anything missing...so it's actually just a surprise ending cuz ppl arent' expecting that...good job!

[Seth]

I love the words you used to rhyme as in; event and repent, times and dimes, and moon and noon.
Though it seemed a bit shaky in some parts I really liked this a LOT. Nicely written, the last two lines were my favorite.