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[GPRacer]

I can’t stand it when girls cry
They are sobbin to hard to tell you why.
Then it makes me feel like something I did
My heart sinks, and I feel like a kid.
I don’t know what to say
I don’t know what to do
All I can do is to hold her
Oblivious of what to tell
When that first tear fell
I hold her, tell her I’m here
She says she’s glad I’m near
I would do anything to have this girl
Even if I have to take a wild whirl.
I love this girl with all my heart,
And for my age doesn’t sound very smart.
I still have the scent of her on my hand
Something if lost I couldn’t stand.
The girl I’m talking about is so awesome to me
If I had lost her in any way I dunno what I’d be!
This girl has anything and everything I could want
Thought some things may come back to haunt.
I spent tonight with the best girl in my life
Whenever I’m not with her it seems such a strife.

[bloodredtears]

interesting piece...this starts off great...nice way to capture attention, with a statement that is filled with a negative emotion, hate, great job!

[GPRacer]

thanks

this was written the night of my homecoming dance. My date's grandmother had died only a week prior to the dance, and a song we were dancing to was played at the funeral...so she was extremely upset and cried for a lil while..

[Mikepoet]

Holding a girl who cries is the best thing I have ever been able to come up with.. They often feel beaten by whatever made them cry and the strength of another who holds them seems o make them feel not so alone in their battle.

[John Barnett]

Mike is right, great poem.