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Post by alostandbrokensoul on May 24, 2004 20:42:35 GMT -5
I'm drowning is silence because no one can hear me I'm drowning in darkness because no one can see me I'm drowning in lonliness because no one loves me I'm drowning alone because no one's with me I'm drowning in fear because humanity hates me I drowned because no one could save me.
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Jun 4, 2004 5:45:37 GMT -5
honey i thought i'd commented on this already! the repetition was effective in this, really made you slow down to take it in. nice work, i like! x rinna x
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