Nearing An End

BlackRainbow
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Der Engel Schw?rzung

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Nearing An End May 5, 2004 12:15:59 GMT -5

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Post by BlackRainbow on May 5, 2004 12:15:59 GMT -5

Death is the one you wait for
As you know it waits for me
For when it's knocking at your door
You still long to turn the key

You know when it is coming
I know you can feel it now
No matter how long your running
Death's caught up to you some how

The cold chill apon your neck
Emotions running free
A hand you hold with no respect
Death waits for you and me...

:)http://darknesspoet.proboards23.com:)

John Barnett Founders Founder Posts: 994	Nearing An End May 5, 2004 16:01:42 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by John Barnett on May 5, 2004 16:01:42 GMT -5 Very good, I like the rhyme scheme
	Jwalaeb

rinna(on leave...for eternity) Poet Laureate MIA Quitter surfninja Posts: 610	Nearing An End May 6, 2004 6:18:23 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 6, 2004 6:18:23 GMT -5 wow, i concur, this was nice work! x rinna x
	'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'

Seth Virtuoso Root Beer Float Play something country! Posts: 411	Nearing An End Jun 26, 2004 23:54:00 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Seth on Jun 26, 2004 23:54:00 GMT -5 Indeed, I love the flow and how well written it is... A wonderful, lovely write...
	"I see the eternal misery. I feel the caress of beauty around me. I dream of the colors in your crystalized fantasy... Hoping one day, I'll be swept away from reality...

Post by BlackRainbow on May 5, 2004 12:15:59 GMT -5

Post by John Barnett on May 5, 2004 16:01:42 GMT -5

Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 6, 2004 6:18:23 GMT -5

Post by Seth on Jun 26, 2004 23:54:00 GMT -5