kelly pt 2

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kelly pt 2 Apr 28, 2004 22:15:53 GMT -5

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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Apr 28, 2004 22:15:53 GMT -5

You fed on my insecurity
The hate I thought I held for the world
Conditioning me
I didn't have to come over
I wanted to wash myself of you
I thought I ruined your life
You sensed it
You were my vulture
Circling me
Waiting for me to fall
You seized your chance
I didn't even see you coming
But I will never forget
You tell me you love me
While I'm pinned so hard
I can't feel my hands
Is that love?
When you were done the first time
You made me coffee.
How sweet, of course I'll have you.
Then you defiled me
Humiliated and dehumanised me
Again and again and again and again
I will never forget your fury.
And I will never forget mine.

'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	kelly pt 2 May 4, 2004 10:41:07 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on May 4, 2004 10:41:07 GMT -5 wow...amazing ...this is so emotionally raw...great job!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

rinna(on leave...for eternity) Poet Laureate MIA Quitter surfninja Posts: 610	kelly pt 2 May 4, 2004 18:38:58 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 4, 2004 18:38:58 GMT -5 thanks! i wrote this after part 1 (duh) and i still find both a bit tough to reread. still raw after 4 years. x rinna x
	'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'

John Barnett Founders Founder Posts: 994	kelly pt 2 May 5, 2004 15:59:55 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by John Barnett on May 5, 2004 15:59:55 GMT -5 Wow, tough stuff
	Jwalaeb

rinna(on leave...for eternity) Poet Laureate MIA Quitter surfninja Posts: 610	kelly pt 2 May 5, 2004 23:32:05 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 5, 2004 23:32:05 GMT -5 momf, thank you very much for reading. unfortunately i'm not alone in rape. x rinna x
	'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'

Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Apr 28, 2004 22:15:53 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on May 4, 2004 10:41:07 GMT -5

Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 4, 2004 18:38:58 GMT -5

Post by John Barnett on May 5, 2004 15:59:55 GMT -5

Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 5, 2004 23:32:05 GMT -5