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Glass.
Apr 16, 2004 3:24:02 GMT -5
Post by hantigger on Apr 16, 2004 3:24:02 GMT -5
Glass.
Fragments of glass, shattered. Reflecting the world in fractured parts. One eye looks back in a steel gaze, Blinking at the sharp shreds of life, Each piece of glassy moon. The surface smooth, an ice held river.
I look into the pool, shes staring back unblinking. I wont yield beneath the burden. She doesnt stir.
Deep eyes, Her face, a scar scrapped down one side, I feel the line down my own. My own eyes stare back. Me.
I hear the distant screams, Distant thuds, Muffled voices. All shouting in the same hideous voice I love you. As the last phone rings in the debris Unanswered.
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Glass.
Apr 17, 2004 18:34:51 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on Apr 17, 2004 18:34:51 GMT -5
that was a wonderful piece...great job!
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Glass.
Apr 18, 2004 6:42:11 GMT -5
Post by hantigger on Apr 18, 2004 6:42:11 GMT -5
Thank you!
Hannah.
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Glass.
Apr 19, 2004 19:23:47 GMT -5
Post by John Barnett on Apr 19, 2004 19:23:47 GMT -5
I really liked this too, very good Hannah.
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Glass.
Apr 20, 2004 4:03:57 GMT -5
Post by hantigger on Apr 20, 2004 4:03:57 GMT -5
Thank you.
Hannah.
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Glass.
May 9, 2004 18:18:07 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 9, 2004 18:18:07 GMT -5
hannah, this was fantastic! great job! x rinna x
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Glass.
May 10, 2004 5:08:52 GMT -5
Post by hantigger on May 10, 2004 5:08:52 GMT -5
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