Scars of love

[Mikepoet]

Hey little girl, all alone in the world
Are you ready for your first love and the pain?
When the hurt is over you may not ever
want to love anyone again.

He is the one who makes your heart burn,
But watch yourself do not believe your eyes.
Sometimes I love you only leads.
To the blood stains on our thies.

Hey little girl, how does it feel to be a woman?
Isn’t that what you’ve always dreamed about?
And you will see love is not always as it’s supposed to be.
Scars of love will not ever come for free.

Now little girl I think you see the story,
just hide your scars so no one else will see.
We men do not feel these scars till we give our hearts
and sometimes princess charming rides off in the night.

And scars of love will never come for free.


I hope this is cool to be on this forum.

[bloodredtears]

first off it's perfect for this forum...i really love the line

Scars of love will never come for free

i really like that you ended with that tooo...great job!

[Mikepoet]

Thank you this is old stuff I was like 17 to 19 and in high school when I wrote this. This was one of my first completed poems.

[amberputis]

awesome job... ;D

[Mikepoet]

;DThanks

[Chaotic_Thetis]

A nicely expressed view, i agree with Kris, the last line was a perfect ending ^_^

[Mikepoet]

I am glad you lie it.. ;DThis was the first time I tried to feel a ladies pain..