Wolf
Apprentice
In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends.
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Smokey
Feb 24, 2004 15:47:01 GMT -5
Post by Wolf on Feb 24, 2004 15:47:01 GMT -5
Smokey
...for Smokey
Smokey, we hardly knew you--
You came that chilly night, a vagrant
streak of grey, disappearing beneath
my truck to park beneath the warmth of its
muffler--
and, when we looked,
you came forth, regal, proud, sleek;
yet not too proud to refrain from purring
as we picked you up...
There you were, in our arms,
soaking up our love,
a love-machine running on twelve cylinders...
Perhaps you were a stray--you didn't say;
but if so, a well-fed stranger were you,
fed not only with victuals, but also the nectar
of love--and this you gave freely to us,
purring loudly your contentment for all to hear.
I had to leave, and so, Smokey, we put you down--
and for a few moments you stayed,
rumbling deep within your warm heart your farewell;
then you turned,
blending into the night along the road...
A sudden thud,
and,
Smokey,
Your memory still lives...
© T. GhostWolf Davidson, November 25, 1974
Footnote: Two days after the animal control officer had picked up Smokey, he called me and told me that he had taken Smokey to the vet - and the vet was able to fix the injuries; and that Smokey was around eight years old. The animal control officer told me he adopted Smokey. We kept in touch, and Smokey lived another eight years, finally dying peacefully while sleeping.
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Smokey
Feb 24, 2004 20:16:48 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on Feb 24, 2004 20:16:48 GMT -5
awwww..yeah for smokey! good poem! great way to remember an "old friend"
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Smokey
Feb 26, 2004 15:36:15 GMT -5
Post by serenepoetress on Feb 26, 2004 15:36:15 GMT -5
How very lucky Smokey still had one life left. this is very endearing...
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Smokey
Feb 27, 2004 23:20:52 GMT -5
Post by SilverEyes on Feb 27, 2004 23:20:52 GMT -5
I'm happy to see that Smokey lived. With two cats myself and another one that ran away, I'm also happy to know that he found a loving home. Whew. Nice write.
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Seth
Virtuoso
Root Beer Float
Play something country!
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Smokey
Mar 15, 2004 16:42:14 GMT -5
Post by Seth on Mar 15, 2004 16:42:14 GMT -5
Yes I agree completely with everyone before me. Wonderful write.
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Smokey
Apr 1, 2004 20:21:10 GMT -5
Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 1, 2004 20:21:10 GMT -5
You have such amazing stories to tell from your life, I can honestly say you leave me in awe.
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Smokey
Apr 30, 2004 10:18:02 GMT -5
Post by Mikepoet on Apr 30, 2004 10:18:02 GMT -5
A happy poem, that has a moments saddness and turns out good in the end. Glad your cat stayed in touch, lol. ;D I remember 1974 was in 3rd grade I think.
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Smokey
May 4, 2004 5:18:22 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 4, 2004 5:18:22 GMT -5
to write like that about a pet..wow. i agree with kelz on this, you have some pretty awesome stories to tell.... x rinna x
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