Celestial
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Post by Celestial on Feb 28, 2004 16:32:46 GMT -5
A poem I thought up after looking at a picture of a man looking over a grave. Enjoy.
Goodbye... Such a sad word That is tossed around And used by so many Without ever knowing How much it truely hurts...
It hurt me when you said that word... It still stings a hole in my heart And now you're gone for good And I weep still at your parting
"Let me do this one thing" you said... You promised you'd be back But now you're not and it's my turn To use the frail word with so much sadness...
Goodbye my friend... My companion... My father...
Goodbye Always Hurts By CAB 2004
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 29, 2004 2:32:11 GMT -5
I can definitely relate to this piece. Not that I had anyone die on me, but moving away from my friends and the only life that I knew. The first stanza is the one that means the most to me. Nice write.
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 29, 2004 4:15:56 GMT -5
wonderful piece...goodbye does really hurt...seems like my whole life has been one long goodbye sometimes..great job!
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Post by serenepoetress on Mar 1, 2004 0:04:15 GMT -5
The sentiments are beautifully expressed in this poem...You have captured the sorrow of loss very well...excellent work!
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Post by richie on Mar 4, 2004 5:54:59 GMT -5
lovely poem you have talent and are very poetic I can also relate to this. take care Richie.
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