Wolf
Apprentice
In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends.
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Post by Wolf on Feb 19, 2004 1:57:28 GMT -5
Nightfall I
I walk with only the stars to light my way;
the winds have whispered things to say...
The night is too dark, my Friend...
Are you afraid? You are?
Then hold my hand, and stay close--
close beside me...
There are no stars, my Friend
and no clouds obscure the sky--
Where is the moon?
You'll see--stay with me...
The earth is too still, my Friend
and the gathering mists are cold--
Why is it so deathly quiet?
You'll know soon--come with me...
Can you see the earth, my Friend?
You cannot? Then stay with me
and I shall guide you...
We've a long way to go, my Friend--
Where are we going?
Home, my Friend, just--home.
© T. GhostWolf Davidson, April 20, 1972
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 19, 2004 10:25:12 GMT -5
beautiful...the message in here is wonderful! great job, very cool style with the questions and answers in here!
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 19, 2004 23:19:20 GMT -5
I like the conversational format of this piece and the message too. Nice write.
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Post by serenepoetress on Feb 20, 2004 20:43:40 GMT -5
That was beautiful, peaceful and so well expressed that death seemed welcoming...an excellent job here Wolf! i am not surprised!
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Celestial
Novice
Celestial.Photographer.Poet.
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Post by Celestial on Mar 1, 2004 11:48:07 GMT -5
Again, another masterpiece from you. I enjoyed it and I like how you portrayed, for me anyway, a parent and child. The parent showing the child the way home after they were lost. Kind of like friends and other relationships much like that. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Always.
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Deleted Member
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Post by Deleted on Mar 3, 2004 15:58:26 GMT -5
I loved reading it. It seemed... beautiful in a sort of haunting way, you know? The questions in there added to the overall mysteriousness of it... Great job.
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 21, 2004 6:11:58 GMT -5
ghostwolf,
magnificent flow, magnificent style.
x rinna x
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