Drowning

Seth
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Drowning Apr 1, 2004 20:30:18 GMT -5

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Post by Seth on Apr 1, 2004 20:30:18 GMT -5

Hm, I almost drowned when my cousin pushed me into the very deep water, of course the idiot forgot I can't swim...

But, anyway, this was wonderfully written and contained a certain realism to it. It was almost like reliving that time, also points for the fact this isn't from actualy experience...

"I see the eternal misery.
I feel the caress of beauty around me.

I dream of the colors in your crystalized
fantasy...
Hoping one day, I'll be swept away from reality...

bloodredtears
Legend

I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk.

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Drowning Apr 2, 2004 0:39:59 GMT -5

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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 2, 2004 0:39:59 GMT -5

thanks again everyone...this piece is about drowning, but i think on a deeper level its how i felt after the guy i felt so strongly about said he just wanted to be friends...so it can be taken either way...i've been doing to much self-inspection lately, so that's why that came out

** Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears

**Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

rinna(on leave...for eternity) Poet Laureate MIA Quitter surfninja Posts: 610	Drowning May 11, 2004 4:45:36 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 11, 2004 4:45:36 GMT -5 kris, i can't swim so this was great to read. feeds the fear you know? great work! x rinna x
	'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'

Post by Seth on Apr 1, 2004 20:30:18 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Apr 2, 2004 0:39:59 GMT -5

Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 11, 2004 4:45:36 GMT -5