The Walk

[NeverMore]

Take a walk with me
a walk back in time
to a place in a dream
when all was so clear

down that gravel road
leeding to flowing rivers
deep in the mountains
where peace of thinking lives

share with me a time
where each and every thought
can find it's own way
like a slow summer morning

come with me while I search
for the man I used to be
look for the heart
with a shine for all

I have been lost a while
somewhere behind foggy valleys
trees far to dense
to walk right through

see what I can see though
slowly the mist is lifting
hand in hand walk with me
to find my way back

[Seth]

Take a walk with me
a walk back in time
to a place in a dream
when all was so clear

This part really drew me in from the start, i don't know why. I suppose the way it reads, caught my attention. Wonderful intro.

share with me a time
where each and every thought
can find it's own way
like a slow summer morning

I loved this part too, because as well for its wonderful wording. "like a slow summer morning" that is an intriguing line that I haven't heard before. Beautiful piece, really captivates and enthralled me. Stellar write!

[T.J. Barber]

Very Nice Joe. It's nice to see you jump right back in to the swing of things. You too Seth. "Great Job" is in order to the both of you. Also Joe, this is a great poem. I enjoyed it very, very much. It was nice to see something fresh on the site. Good job!!

TJ