Gravity Adjuster Machine

[Todd]

Many amazing scenes would be created,
by a gravity adjuster machine.
Feet loosened from gravitational grip,
alot or a bit,or any degree between.
Behold,over there I see,
a river loosened from it's bed,
suspended in air,serene.
In it's water I'll take a dip,
with a slow motion back flip.
By oceans shoreline,
giant whales float before my astonished sight.
All sorts of life marine floats calmly by,
as in a surreal dream.
Confused birds at first fly too high,
to stratosphere of sky.
Then they learn to glide,
with wings resting mostly by their sides.
Yonder, over city block,
a floating traffic cop,face frozen by shock,
whistle dangling above his head,
what a day for officer Fred.
There's quite a mess,
numerous cars in multiple wrecks,
bewildered people scream and shout,
others laughter bellows out.
Tethered to earth before the gravity adjuster machine,
the operator,with eye lids parted wide,
pushing buttons and turning dials,
brings everything slowly back to earth.
A day so wild she has seen,it's been great.
Next gravity adjusting session,Tueasday at eight.

Todd J.Caudill

[Seth]

Cool! Ironically that's the first word that left my mouth upon finishing this. Seriously, this is such an awesome, gripping, mindconsuming piece. Refreshing, with wonderful diction, flow and rhythm. One of my favorites thus far.

[X x K e l Z x X]

This is very good, very unique, I likez.

[T.J. Barber]

I agree with Kelly and Seth. This write was an awesome piece! I loved every mindnumbing piece of it. It's rhythym and flow was just awe inspiring. I think many great poets must have started out with pieces such as this. Great Job...

TJ

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

I love the images you stirred for me, Todd. Very surreal, love the originality of this!