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Post by alostandbrokensoul on Mar 14, 2005 15:31:32 GMT -5
cinderella didnt live happily snow white's prince was a fluke Sleeping beauty left her prince for a guy named Luke
The princess sued the pauper for copying her face the mad hatter and the door mouse were simply a disgrace.
the frog wasnt a prince but turned into a bum and as for Thumbelina she got squished by a thumb.
Cinderella didnt live happily she got glass stuck in her foot got stuck with the cleaning and still got covered in soot.
Snow White never again ate apples the dwarves were really mad for calling them dwarves when there were really just short men.
Sleeping beauty was an insomniac she walked around all night no one really knew Maleficent was actually nice.
What twisted fairy tales the things we never knew what a tangled web we weave and no one had a clue.
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Post by Seth on Mar 25, 2005 1:02:54 GMT -5
Hey, this is fascinating. Truly enthralling and has such an 'original' feel to it. I love the revealing 'truths' behind those classic fairytales. Stunning and breathtaking.
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Post by culupa on Mar 31, 2005 8:38:24 GMT -5
NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Apr 12, 2005 5:47:33 GMT -5
ALABS,
I dig this very much! Sadly, reality's as twisted and tragic as most fairytales these days...
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Post by thistledown on Nov 26, 2008 1:58:14 GMT -5
Brilliant write,I thoroughly enjoyed the read, what an imagination you have. from thistledown
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Post by butterfly on Dec 5, 2008 4:11:32 GMT -5
I really like this poem...bit of reality thrown it. Thoroughly enjoyed it.
Butterfly
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Post by Solitary Devil on Aug 4, 2010 9:42:47 GMT -5
You've earned me as a fan of yours...
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Post by WolfLarsen on Feb 7, 2011 15:34:59 GMT -5
I like the idea. And I think there's a great rhythm here. But I don't like rhymes. Anyway, I enjoyed reading it!
Cheers!
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