NeverMore
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Beethoven Looking f*g
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Bird
Mar 13, 2005 0:55:08 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on Mar 13, 2005 0:55:08 GMT -5
where is the word
that tells this story
the sounds that make sense
of what is behind that door
how is it said
when emptiness engulfs
where wings begin to sprout
leaving takes shape
does a bird plan it's way
when flying home
back to a place
where his heart might
once again sing
does fear strike his heart
of futures unknown
how will he fly
or could he walk in the rain
Okay, so here is one with more hidden meanings then Webster could include in his dictionary *S*
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Seth
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Root Beer Float
Play something country!
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Bird
Mar 25, 2005 1:05:24 GMT -5
Post by Seth on Mar 25, 2005 1:05:24 GMT -5
Haha, This entails once more, such thought-consuming momentum. Magnificent and captivating, I enjoy the images playing through my mind, the wording here that elevates the experience 'drawn' out here. Very cool, very interesting.
I absolutely love it.
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Bird
Apr 12, 2005 5:50:25 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Apr 12, 2005 5:50:25 GMT -5
Nevermore,
Tsk. Making me think... *L*
I love your words.
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Bird
Apr 12, 2005 20:30:26 GMT -5
Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 12, 2005 20:30:26 GMT -5
It's nice to see you back Rinna. I've been missing you.
Tj
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NeverMore
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Beethoven Looking f*g
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Bird
Apr 17, 2005 1:11:20 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on Apr 17, 2005 1:11:20 GMT -5
Ah my task! A success! Thinking I am told is always a good thing
Thank you Lady.. *S*
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Bird
Apr 21, 2005 8:14:50 GMT -5
Post by QueenofDarkness on Apr 21, 2005 8:14:50 GMT -5
This is a great piece. It made me think about some things. Keep up the good work.
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Bird
Apr 27, 2005 11:36:57 GMT -5
Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 27, 2005 11:36:57 GMT -5
Ohh yeah, I guess I should post some feedback. Sorry Joe, I was caught up in the fact that Rinna had returned for a split moment. Ahem, this piece was truly thought prevoking. It's flow and rythym were at one with your message. I truly enjoyed it Joe, I guess i've never given thought to the bird's path home.....Keep it up!!!
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NeverMore
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Beethoven Looking f*g
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Bird
Apr 30, 2005 13:44:48 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on Apr 30, 2005 13:44:48 GMT -5
Well, despite the title, I never really expected anyone to look at the bird in the picture. There is so much human between the lines. It just goes to show that we all see something different in every work. I am glad you found it thught provoking, that simply means I am doing as I hoped... Thanks
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