NeverMore
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Post by NeverMore on Mar 11, 2005 21:18:22 GMT -5
over all the years with all the miles the travels of life the pains and joys the smiles the tears
some things seldom change as I sit remembering those feelings that engulfed us telling us true there was more then we understood
where a voice could tell us forever was real now sitting here I realise an old truth I still see your face
movement in life is sometimes so slow until we understand what is time has changed us but one time is now closer I wonder if you fear it
((I know none of you know this person, but this poem is dedicated to Melissa))
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Seth
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Play something country!
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Post by Seth on Mar 25, 2005 1:00:51 GMT -5
Hm. Very thought-provoking. There's something about it that I cannot place at the moment, yet the wording and flow here, paints an intriguing portrait in my mind, and also consumes... Gets me thinking. As always it was a captivating read.
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