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Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Feb 1, 2005 21:54:29 GMT -5
It's been too long since I wrote a good song Been too long, way too long I feel like I am almost gone 'Cause I sit here all alone No one to hear me, no one to see me No one to place me where I need to be I hit the ground running and I ain't looking back Everybody tellin' me I don't know jack But I do and that's the truth in which I speak Ya'll keep telling me my tracks are weak It's not my peak, havoc has wreaked And now I'm lookin' up to the world above me Thinkin' back on how you all used to love me Now ya just wanna come push and shove me And the bad boys want to sneak up and club me But I can't sleep and I can't eat Until I nail another rhyme with a damn good beat So for now, I say peace out but have no doubt That Fox is gonna have another big breakout
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Post by John Barnett on Feb 2, 2005 23:29:05 GMT -5
You know, it's been a while since I have read anything new from you Scott, it's great to see you are writing again. This is awesome man, set to music, it would be outstanding, great piece of work man! Keep it up!
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Seth
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Root Beer Float
Play something country!
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Post by Seth on Feb 4, 2005 0:16:31 GMT -5
I agree, this is really catchy and moving. Easy to get lost in, and listen to... Nice rhythm and flow, wonderfully done.
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