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Post by Seahorse on Jan 3, 2005 22:23:18 GMT -5
It’s happened again
I’m sharp as a knife
But I have been trapped by the
High feminine
My blaze of glory has
Gone up in a powder
Puff.
Of commercially viable
Smoke.
My lack of feminine wiles
Have left me like
A Clown without his
Makeup
An artist without their art
So resigned my fate
At the mirror of
Commercial Artless
Glamour.
My mirror my enemy
My make up brush
My salvation.
Seahorse
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Jan 11, 2005 20:19:35 GMT -5
Very unique write, I like the imagery expressed here.
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Mwalvbk
Apprentice
I came from the fire, now I'm here to burn
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Post by Mwalvbk on Jan 13, 2005 19:52:24 GMT -5
Well done
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Jan 22, 2005 7:01:02 GMT -5
interesting write here, seahorse. i was a little confused, but i think i was lost in translation....
just curious - is the last line meant to be part of the poem or is that your signature to your piece?
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Post by Seahorse on Jan 24, 2005 3:18:11 GMT -5
Rinna,
Sorry about that. The Seahorse is just a signature not part of the poem.
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Jan 24, 2005 6:41:18 GMT -5
seahorse, don't be sorry. i hope i didn't offend.  |
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Post by Seahorse on Feb 1, 2005 3:55:14 GMT -5
It's okay Rinna. I'm not offended.
Tania
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Seth
Virtuoso
Root Beer Float
Play something country!
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Post by Seth on Feb 4, 2005 0:14:43 GMT -5
The imagery and feel
is very refreshing, actually.
I love the wording here,
it brings out a quiet, sad beauty
to the poem.
Very lamentful and easily related to.
It's subject is something commonly written,
yet the way its worded, is really
original and breathtaking.
Stellar write,
Seahorse.
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