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Post by A2sHaTo on Dec 27, 2004 20:36:19 GMT -5
Today, I rely entirely on you, tomorrow's another story. Come one, then come all, because I am in no hurry.
Today, I crawl one step at a time, tomorrow's when I walk. Come one, then come all, because I am quickly growing.
Why is it that I can run, but never fast enough?
Why can't I continue one project, before I start another?
Today, I try to get away, tomorrow I'll be back. Come one, then come all, because I just can't get enough.
Today, I learned a lesson, that tomorrow I will forget. Come one, then bring them all, because it's all that I have left.
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Post by Seahorse on Jan 3, 2005 22:29:04 GMT -5
I really like this poem as it seems to be about survival. I think is is very inspiring as it is about doing the best you can with what you are presented with in this life. This paragraph summarises it superbly. "Today, I learned a lesson, that tomorrow I will forget. Come one, then bring them all, because it's all that I have left" I totally relate to this. Seahorse.
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Jan 11, 2005 20:19:04 GMT -5
Yes I like this also, the attitude is great.
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Post by Seth on Jan 29, 2005 18:27:10 GMT -5
Very cool. Indeed, the feel and emotion in this is great, the wording and flow was really what stuck with me. Awesome write.
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