Lovely Death

[DeadByMorning]

It’s so cold here
Now that you’re gone
I thought I could
Bring you back
But all I did
Was hurt you,
Give you another
Thing to worry about.
My heart’s breaking
And I hope yours is too
Because I want you to
Feel what you
Made me feel
The night you left me
With out the stars.
I want you to know
Heartache and suffering
It’s cold here
Without you by my side
I can’t let you go,
I can’t believe
I can’t let you go
Why can’t I let you go?
I’m making you hurt,
I’m making you cry
But you’re making me
DIE.
My heart is breaking
It’s dying within your grasp
It’s choking
It’s killing itself.
I can’t use a blade
To forget the pain
Not anymore
Because I know
You don’t give a sh*t
About what I do to myself
Because you have someone else
To care about
Right?

[bloodredtears]

i really enjoyed this piece...

I’m making you hurt,
I’m making you cry
But you’re making me
DIE.

i loved this part because i totally know what you mean...
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[amberputis]

Because I know
You don’t give a sh*t
About what I do to myself
Because you have someone else
To care about
Right?

AH, i hate watching the one you love with someone else. Right now i have to live with it, and i've coped somewhat, but i used to get torn apart each time i saw my ex with his new g/f. Still to this day i have to turn my head....but anyways great write here, u expressed yourself beautifully!

[Dreamcatcher]

Very well written work on the pain of lost love. So many can relate to your wonderful poem.....Meg