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Post by Broken hope on Dec 16, 2004 19:56:33 GMT -5
Got bored tried something new
What a waste, I can taste
your lips on mine. Without a sigh
Lost my mind for you this time.
Answers to my rhymes, riddles for the time.
Ran away for good you said i could.
i love you, i hate you.
This is the end lost a friend.
No more feeling Tired of healing.
Broken hearts die both of us cry.
Walked away for love sadistic one above.
What a waste, I can taste
Tears on my lips. One last sip
poison will do, anything for you.
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wildXone
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A forgotten one from the "old days"....
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Post by wildXone on Dec 18, 2004 21:03:35 GMT -5
Powerful, very nice work.
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Dec 22, 2004 3:06:09 GMT -5
simple form, simple rhyme, but the message isn't lost. well done, i like it!
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Post by alostandbrokensoul on Dec 23, 2004 17:19:04 GMT -5
good i like it.
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