Corrupted

[alostandbrokensoul]

This world has been corrupted
there are shadows on the walls,
this world has been corrupted
there's profanity scrawled on stall.

This world has been corrupted
people are dying every day,
this world has been corrupted
now everyone must pay.

This world has been corrupted
there are parents hitting kids,
this world has been corrupted
there are children commiting sins.

This world has been corrupted
there are guns in everyone's hands,
this world has been corrupted
religions being banned.

This world has been corrupted
there are kids who hide away,
this world has been corrupted
where people kill each day.

This world has been corrupted
no one will survive,
this world has been corrupted
everyone will have their day to die.

This world has been corrupted
there is no one here anymore,
this world has been corrupted
into something no one wants to live for.

[bloodredtears]

this is a really great piece...it shows alot of the problems in our society today....some of the lines get wordy but other than that the rhyme scheme is great! good job!

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

ooh, i like this one, ALABS. great work!