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Post by nevadasky on Nov 28, 2004 18:59:59 GMT -5
it's the little girl I left behind to the woman of today is where I'm going
it's my reluctance that holds me captive knowing I will soon answer to another year in age
when we're young we pay no mind to giant hours we ramble through the moment with no thoughts of tomorrow
but all that changes as running years takes what it can forcing us into the aching snow
I continue to try to outline bygone memories and graciously accept the accumulation
of time to gently blur their lines
acceptance - - my only salvation as I refuse to give in and fight with myself
trying not to stubborn myself to death
nevadasky (c)
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Post by John Barnett on Nov 29, 2004 20:27:06 GMT -5
You have a unique format nevadasky, I like it
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Post by T.J. Barber on Nov 29, 2004 20:28:52 GMT -5
Very Nice! This reminded me of a piece I wrote several years back. I was tired of getting older and didn't want the "grown-up" responsibilities of life. Staying a kid forever is what I had in mind but, life doesn't allow that and those who try to fight it, end up broken and lost for a better tomorrow. Very well written, I truly enjoyed it,
TJ
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Post by nevadasky on Nov 30, 2004 8:04:04 GMT -5
thanks TJ and Prince,
yes, you will find I am kinda unique...I like being different...getting older lets me do that.
I appreciate your comments...and will get to commenting on others too.
nevadasky
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Dec 14, 2004 19:36:45 GMT -5
i love your style, and your philosophy, nevadasky. write on.
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