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warrior
Nov 27, 2004 17:43:58 GMT -5
Post by nevadasky on Nov 27, 2004 17:43:58 GMT -5
bound by a spell
her magic knows no
boundaries
she risks the perils of
the dark
spinning into a
maelstrom
and as spears bristle
off her shield
she stoops from
heaven to
bear
and with a mighty blow
the steady cold hard
arm of justice rings
true
and all that's left is the
smell of metallic
in the air
nevadasky (c)
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warrior
Nov 29, 2004 20:26:26 GMT -5
Post by John Barnett on Nov 29, 2004 20:26:26 GMT -5
Nice format, great write, I really like this
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warrior
Nov 29, 2004 20:26:34 GMT -5
Post by T.J. Barber on Nov 29, 2004 20:26:34 GMT -5
Awesome write, I'm not sure i've ever seen one written like this. Awesome authenticity on this one. I enjoyed reading it very much...
TJ
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warrior
Dec 14, 2004 19:44:59 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Dec 14, 2004 19:44:59 GMT -5
BRILLIANT! i am a fan, nevadasky.
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Mwalvbk
Apprentice
I came from the fire, now I'm here to burn
Posts: 111
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warrior
Dec 25, 2004 20:42:33 GMT -5
Post by Mwalvbk on Dec 25, 2004 20:42:33 GMT -5
Yes, I too have become a fan of your work, you are very talented I must say.
EF
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