Temptation

[amberputis]

My eyes refuse to look away
as my body longs to be held.
My lips I have to bite back,
or temptation would over whelm.
The urge is uncontrolable
the want is now a need.
My wounds should be healed,
but still I continue to bleed.
Desire is over powering
My heart tells no lies
But what it wants, it does not always get
So I have to avoid his eyes.
But once in a while I catch a stare
and my heart is at my feet.
Temptation can surely rise above
and will leave you further weak.

[bloodredtears]

wonderful piece here...very well done...i loved this part:

My wounds should be healed,
but still I continue to bleed.
Desire is over powering
My heart tells no lies

great job!

[Chaotic_Thetis]

Nicely written, it read rather smoothly with the exception of one or two lines but not enough to throw the reader off course. The last two lines are strong enough to stand on their own, and rounds off perfectly the entire poem.

[Mikepoet]

Good poem..I love good poetry..It seems the deepest feelings are in poetry..a good poet feels deeper than most people..that is the price for the rhymes..We must feel this pain to write it..

[::..::FoX::..::]

This is a great piece, Amber.