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Nov 9, 2004 20:10:03 GMT -5
Post by Lexus on Nov 9, 2004 20:10:03 GMT -5
Your so cunning and so sleek How you run your little feet Into the mouth of an honest soul To spring forth to pulsate and grow They say "Oh what a tangled web we weave" But all your after is a soul to believe You thrive on anger, agony and tears The truth is all you shall ever fear For someone will break your hold and never lie Which leaves you to your doom to die
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NeverMore
Virtuoso
Beethoven Looking f*g
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Nov 10, 2004 3:47:36 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on Nov 10, 2004 3:47:36 GMT -5
All to often, the people that use these things, do so only to protect thier own heart, because someone they love is unsure.
I liked this work, it reminds me very much of the writtings of someone I concider a friend, well done!
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Nov 13, 2004 6:36:02 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Nov 13, 2004 6:36:02 GMT -5
Welcome to PoetClub, Lexus. I enjoyed this, it read sing-songy to me. Looking forward to reading you more! Cheers
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