Story

[QueenofDarkness]

maybe I shouldn't talk
maybe I shouldn't smile
maybe I'll go back
to the past for awhile
I don't know everything
its all so confusing
lowblow
I think I've been abusing
what I've got
the words that I'm using
that was the past
for my everlasting story
I'm tired
tired of saying I'm sorry
so writer please give me a break
the outcast lives too gorey
rewrite that page
then come back to me
let the birds out of the cage
while you're at it
let the lovers be free
make these changes
before you come back to me
because I've got something to do
don't be so quick
have to give my positivity
time to stick
so I'll kneel down by my shoe
and I'll be praying for you.

[T.J. Barber]

WOW!

Very nice....I enjoyed the flow from this piece and truly enjoyed every bit of emotion that was oozing from this write. Very well written my friend...

TJ

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

QoD,

I'm tired
tired of saying I'm sorry

i love that - very well done!