Insomnia
Novice
"Excuse me while I kiss the sky..."
Posts: 5
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Post by Insomnia on Oct 16, 2004 2:18:58 GMT -5
Best on his back to his suckerpunch foe; A hindrance that salvaged a sacrosanct soul. Stolen and makde know to Beelzebub's fate Collection of essence A moment too late
Feet o the ledge. man of coppered mane Fall to the sky and feel gravity's pain Remember your errs and clear the stain See what needs to be seen and start again
Hoaver close to feel his breath Hear the black blood underneath The wise would be foolish to snidely believe That they've seen all that is; All that he can perceive...
Fluid eyes, blue as flame Searching the real for his face again An existance to question, but no in vain Take the consequence and give it a name
Paradox in flesh, pregnant with beautified contemplation A voice demaning untouched fixation A rarity wrapped in human skin An angelic face-- Glazed with sin
Cerulean sight, remain the same Bless the past and watch it wane Kudos to one who overcame-- Sleep, for you ar whole again. *
For Patrick, my most honest friend. Stay strong...
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Post by T.J. Barber on Oct 17, 2004 0:12:08 GMT -5
awesome write my friend....this piece was indeed touching and I found it ministered to me in more than one way indeed. I look forward to reading more from you...
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Oct 17, 2004 7:12:07 GMT -5
oh insomnia - i enjoyed this one very much! very well done, i quite like the title too! rinna
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Post by John Barnett on Oct 18, 2004 17:12:39 GMT -5
I like the piece and the title, very well done Excellent!
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