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Post by alostandbrokensoul on Sept 26, 2004 17:14:49 GMT -5
what more do you want from me
what more can I give you,
but the broken pieces of my heart
and the fact that I love you.
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Post by bloodredtears on Sept 26, 2004 21:56:06 GMT -5
that is an amazing piece in and of itself. it would work great as a short piece....cool!
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Post by Seth on Sept 28, 2004 12:40:34 GMT -5
We write what needs to be said, in the shortest most effective way. Wonderful stanza, simple yet in relation to most (if not all) of us.
Fantastic write.
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