Anymore

[alostandbrokensoul]

So I wasnt sure whether or not to put this is heart scorned or tradgety so I thought Miscellaneous would be a good place hope you like it.

I loved you, I knew I was right
but I thought we be together
for more than just a night.

You got what you wanted
but took a little bit more
and now again I am taunted.

You have a girlfriend
but you have my heart too
so I guess this is the end.

So stick a knife into my core
deep within my soul
because I dont want to live anymore.

[X x K e l Z x X]

Very deep and painful, nice work though.

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

IMO i think it's more 'heart scorned' but you wrote it, so there's obviously a lot more to this beyond words on a screen and you're torn.

i can feel it, and for a succinct poem, you still pack a massive punch. well done.