None dare Tred (Sigmond's Nightmare)

[NeverMore]

Go ahead
walk in to that place
I guard so well

try to find
what stands behind the wall
you thought
you could knock down

use your biggest hammer
search all you like
the weak spots
will not be found

time wears down all things
it is true
though once the walls
have been breached
do you truely dare tred
on such a ground

is the something there
you hope to find
is there really feeling
deep within
where all are cast out

try as you try
where do you think
you will find the key
for even if the key be found
or the rusty locks be broken
do you really dare
tread in a place so dark and cursed

still fighting all the good fights
with all the right intentions
you may find
what you could never expect

[Seth]

Here, here. This reminds me so much of one of those adventure/dungeon games... Nicely written, the wording and flow was great.

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

yeah i actually agree with seth here word for word, i really enjoyed this.
x r x

[NeverMore]

Well, it did not come from any gaming thoughts, it came from reality, but I can see what you mean *L*

Thank you for the comments