Suicidal Soul

Horn
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Give me wings; I want to fly with someone by my side, wherever the wind takes us

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Suicidal Soul Jul 20, 2004 13:22:41 GMT -5

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Post by Horn on Jul 20, 2004 13:22:41 GMT -5

Suicidal Soul
Time has passed
They have transformed me
I have changed myself
Into this creature so strange to me
What happened?

Darkness is my blood
A lie is my appearance
Hypocritical are my actions
My thoughts are insane
Murder and rage personify my hands
Hate dwells deep within my heart
Evil is embedded inside my eyes
Fear is in my steps
My memories torture me
That is the true me
Look, look how ugly I am
Why keep fighting?
I give up
You have taken another
Suicidal in the soul

"The mind is a prison which torments until the day you die. One can only escape this meaningless life by embracing the eternal dreamless sleep that we call death."
-Me

Mikepoet Virtuoso Posts: 487	Suicidal Soul Jul 21, 2004 16:16:49 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Mikepoet on Jul 21, 2004 16:16:49 GMT -5 That left me kind of speechless. Well written and expressed, I can say.

desecration Novice Posts: 29	Suicidal Soul Jul 21, 2004 22:43:27 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by desecration on Jul 21, 2004 22:43:27 GMT -5 i can see myself and many others in that. nicely written, you convey very strong emotions.
	Too many die before the grave, screaming for help that is lost among the whispers of the wind. Too many souls are flayed and hung as reminders that are ignored. Too many promises are extinguished and forgotten.

rinna(on leave...for eternity) Poet Laureate MIA Quitter surfninja Posts: 610	Suicidal Soul Jul 22, 2004 22:05:16 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Jul 22, 2004 22:05:16 GMT -5 Why keep fighting? that seems to be the million-dollar question, though the answer's simple enough... because we have hope in a new day. enjoyed this. x r x
	'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'

Seth Virtuoso Root Beer Float Play something country! Posts: 411	Suicidal Soul Jan 29, 2005 18:23:34 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Seth on Jan 29, 2005 18:23:34 GMT -5 Wow the imagery created by this, is so deeply mesmorizing. Interesting write, really gets us all thinking and relating. Beautifully done.
	"I see the eternal misery. I feel the caress of beauty around me. I dream of the colors in your crystalized fantasy... Hoping one day, I'll be swept away from reality...

luscious Novice Posts: 20	Suicidal Soul Feb 21, 2005 23:24:58 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by luscious on Feb 21, 2005 23:24:58 GMT -5 I wrote a poem once..called..Deaths Whisper..part of me died in that poem...words are so powerful that even as they are written they become reality.. Leah
	Love as though there will be no tomorrow

Post by Horn on Jul 20, 2004 13:22:41 GMT -5

Post by Mikepoet on Jul 21, 2004 16:16:49 GMT -5

Post by desecration on Jul 21, 2004 22:43:27 GMT -5

Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Jul 22, 2004 22:05:16 GMT -5

Post by Seth on Jan 29, 2005 18:23:34 GMT -5

Post by luscious on Feb 21, 2005 23:24:58 GMT -5