Fresh Kill

[Burning Innocence]

the tremors shake my already split foundation
bold and true I've tried to remain
words that don't fit you
reality fades along with the distant sun
like the disappearing dream I try to escape to
I held you once, close to my heart
high on pedestal wings
tormented yet fighting
I tear at your flesh
blood pours slowly, trickling down
oh to taste your whole
screaming in a sound proof box
wondering if this fight would last
bringing to my brink of sanity
your salty flesh fresh from my nails
spoonfed cattle lies
the same sugar coated propaganda
never what I expected
can't see through shattered dreams
instead the pieces lie at my feet
I grin with murderous delight
as my blade scrapes against the skin
the flames burn at my already blackened heart
I tremble thinking you cared
wiping the bloody tears
I stab at the shame you've caused
now you lie before me, exposed to the world
dead

[Eclipse]

wow i loved your descriptions in this. very awesome write. a fitting title too. ^.^

[Burning Innocence]

Thank you for your reply. It's for all the people who have caused me pain. I didn't think it was that great at first, but my husband found it so creepy...lol...

[amberputis]

this is kinda creepy, the whole salty flesh and blood theme sort of caught me off guard, jsut because I wasn't expecting it but this was an awesome write. Very nicely done!

[Burning Innocence]

Yeah I tried to make it so it'll catch the reader off guard. I want them to see the hate this person feels...I want them to see what's running through this persons mind.

[T.J. Barber]

Well, let me say that you did catch me off gaurd. Good Job! Tj