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Tania Novice Posts: 49	Being rejected Mar 5, 2004 20:34:35 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Tania on Mar 5, 2004 20:34:35 GMT -5 Rejection is a form of protection against affection And tears are just fears in water form And being different is just a pose against the norm And wondering why I was truly not born To be torn succinctly in two Tania Walsh

amberputis Virtuoso ~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~ Posts: 330	Being rejected Mar 7, 2004 12:09:11 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by amberputis on Mar 7, 2004 12:09:11 GMT -5 this was very well written, great job
	Amber

sweetest17sin Virtuoso don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile! Posts: 252	Being rejected Mar 11, 2004 22:36:25 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sweetest17sin on Mar 11, 2004 22:36:25 GMT -5 awesome job! loved it! i love all ur poems!
	somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

Chaotic_Thetis Apprentice Bleed me! For i have witnessed yet remained silent.Slay me! For i had your love and kept it. Posts: 142	Being rejected Mar 16, 2004 15:12:28 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Chaotic_Thetis on Mar 16, 2004 15:12:28 GMT -5 The last line threw me somewhat off course which i thought was a great touch to the piece, nice work ^_^
	A woman who choses the writing profession often does so as to give herself a rank within a male-dominated society

Eclipse Apprentice It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time. Posts: 222	Being rejected Mar 16, 2004 15:35:43 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Eclipse on Mar 16, 2004 15:35:43 GMT -5 short and sweet. very effective ending. lovely write.
	You saw what you get If you take what you take. Look in the eyes of the test. It's all because... Now there's a feeling I get. When I look to the left. But we can never be sensed. Our searching for a sign.

Sathien Guest	Being rejected Mar 17, 2004 3:53:16 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Sathien on Mar 17, 2004 3:53:16 GMT -5 And tears are just fears in water form loved this line. good job!