Stopped Waiting

[Alex'z Death Chic]

I'm not hanging on every word you say

I'm not eager to know what you'd do

coz I don't give a f*ck either way

Coz I've moved on and through with you



I'm no longer longing for your touch

nor for your warm embrace

I've had enough and a bit too much

and grown sick of your ugly face



My thoughts of you have longed since gone

and the only thing I feel for you now is hate

I'm over you but I'm not yet quite done

Don't worry love, you just wait



I'll make your life a living hell

A living torture you have to go through

and get you locked up in a padded cell

so you'll feel what I felt about you


hmm... I thought I that this could be at the "mad at the world" but decided since it is about love... well...

[Eclipse]

oo i love the anger in this piece. and the last stanza wraps it up very nicely. lovely write.

[Seth]

Yes I too, agree... This was a fantastic piece, I enjoyed it very much. The flow was wonderful and anger felt. Wonderful write indeed.

[sweetest17sin]

lol, this poem made me laugh. i love poems that show obvious emotion. it makes it all the more powerful. i loved it! great, great job!

[amberputis]

wow, yes its quite obvious that you are or were very angry, but what better way to let it out than in poetry?! well done