Eclipse
Apprentice
It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time.
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Post by Eclipse on Apr 12, 2004 11:28:04 GMT -5
Parched Riverbed
Midnight melancholy; Strike me fast and hard. Break the point of clarity. Deal me new cards.
The stereo’s up and blasting, And the mega-bass is thrumming. Fingers playing guitar cords, And these lips are humming.
Drank from the dry spring To put together something of a verse. This caffeine-induced insomnia’s Nothing more than cursed.
Damn these lunar cycles, moon! Pray tell, why don’t you sing? Go insane; run through thoughts, And the silence they tend to bring.
The fetid stench of rotting knowledge Between pages I hope aren’t read. And maybe when I’m recognized, I’ll have long been dead.
Ah! Relief, you finally came! In tired heavy eyes. Inspiration ran away and Found some new disguise.
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Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 12, 2004 17:50:48 GMT -5
Great choice of words. Your entire outline was awesome. I enjoyed it very much. It's feel was purely thought out and certainly eye opening. Great job!
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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 13, 2004 15:55:56 GMT -5
wonderful piece...the last three stanzas were my favorite...utterly amazing...great job!
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