Wolf
Apprentice
In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends.
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Post by Wolf on Feb 27, 2004 17:18:06 GMT -5
Sayonara
...for April
Strange--
How a few sheets
of paper
wield awesome, final,
overwhelming power...
A few strokes of black
on white
and life changes irrevocably...
One setting at dinner
where once were three;
awakening to a bed
suddenly twice as big;
Empty closets, empty drawers--
Empty rooms...
Years of life, laughter;
struggles and pain
--reduced in awesome finality
to solitary memories
never more to be shared...
© T. GhostWolf Davidson, May 7, 1979
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 27, 2004 19:03:14 GMT -5
awesome piece here...i liked how it got right to the point...wonderful!
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 28, 2004 2:05:03 GMT -5
I love this piece. It eloquently states that power of words. I enjoyed this very much.
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Post by serenepoetress on Feb 29, 2004 20:17:31 GMT -5
Hi GhostWolf, You just described my post divorce world in 1994. I am always amazed at your ability to find just the write words to turn a phrase into perfect description! WELL DONE!~serenepoetress
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Post by Sathien on Mar 1, 2004 14:05:30 GMT -5
heartbreaking write. wow.
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Post by JosephScottMorris on Mar 1, 2004 22:37:28 GMT -5
Excellent write! ;DJoe
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