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Post by Alex'z Death Chic on Mar 30, 2004 7:59:27 GMT -5
She stood in the abyss alone gazing at the painting on the wall the moonlight was focused on it yet it was blank
She stood there burning the painting with her stare looking at it with dead eyes it was blank...
Dressed in white rags, she was filthy pale as the painting on the wall she continues to stand there alone in the abyss
A tear slips out her eye down her numb cheek cascading down the bruises on her face yet she remains the same
her eyes... they have changed they're no longer dead yet not quite alive but still, they continue to stare at the painting
They've changed their color as she began to claw at the painting her eyes have turned crimson the painting was bleeding
she stopped... as the painting continued to bleed again, she stared at it as the blood formed her name...
MARGARET...
lol... that's my name... I dreamt about it so I wrote a poem bout it...
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Post by Persephone on Mar 30, 2004 9:43:38 GMT -5
I like the narration. Fits well.
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Post by bloodredtears on Mar 30, 2004 14:14:24 GMT -5
wow...that was an amazing piece...i really wasn't prepared for the ending it was quite a surprise really...i love how you did this piece...great job!
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Post by John Barnett on Mar 30, 2004 15:46:19 GMT -5
Yes, I agree, this was a very nice piece, well done.
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