Avatre
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Just around for the words...^.^
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Post by Avatre on Jan 8, 2004 16:18:55 GMT -5
It's Crazy (To Enjoy Life)
Riding my bike
Four miles in the rain
Walking to the library
In sandals and in pain
So I'm crazy
What's it to you?
To be foolish is to live
What am I to do?
I'm enjoying life
For all that it's worth
Taking risks and having fun
Getting burnt in the sun
I'm enjoying life
Someday I want to skydive
Someday I want to hang glide
And nobody will stop me
They'll be on my side
When I leave you behind
Maybe someday you'll get me
Maybe someday you'll be with me
But until then you'll find me
Just enjoying life
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Post by bloodredtears on Jan 8, 2004 17:15:07 GMT -5
awesome...good job with this...it's very important to take opportunities as the come to you!
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Todd
Novice
What if the Hokey Pokey really is what it's all about? D'OH!
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Post by Todd on Jan 11, 2004 15:46:19 GMT -5
Good poem here.I can relate.Heck,there's people who think I'm nuts because I walk a half mile to a friends house or to the bar.Me,nuts?HA! If anyone's crazy,it's them! ;D Take care,Todd
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Post by SilverEyes on Jan 15, 2004 0:15:17 GMT -5
I love it! Have fun. ;D
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Mikhael
Novice
...and love is not a victory march/it's a cold and it's a broken hallelujah...
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Post by Mikhael on Feb 7, 2004 23:32:22 GMT -5
oh that's nice. i hope you hang-glide. it sounds like fun, to fly. watch out for crop-dusters. this is a nice poem. i like it. i like the third stanza, but i must say you might be a little masochistic, liking sunburns and all. but to each his own. good luck with that, be happy.
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amberputis
Virtuoso
~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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Post by amberputis on Feb 14, 2004 17:44:22 GMT -5
this was...hmm i can't find the word, but while reading this I felt happy and gained confidence just to let go more often. I have always been a firm believer to do things your own way for yourself, and never for anyone else, and i guess knowing that other people are happy with who they are, only shows that you are a very strong person. Which is amazing, being confident and free-spirited is one of the greatest qualities a person can poses. nice job!
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imaginary goddess #5
Novice
shape me into something I never will be, and you'll find out this facade was an escape from reality.
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Post by imaginary goddess #5 on Feb 19, 2004 19:57:02 GMT -5
 Much different from what I've read so far. I think alot of ppl try to play it safe rather than enjoy life. excellent work. Kisses:  - Lianna |
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Post by richie on Feb 20, 2004 14:24:09 GMT -5
Hi Avantre, good poem I would have liked to critique this if you had put it in critique forum.
regards Richie.
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Eclipse
Apprentice
It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time.
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Post by Eclipse on Feb 20, 2004 15:27:34 GMT -5
a very uplifting piece. for some reason it made me want to go stand out in the rain. i'm just strange like that. I like your style. |
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Much different from what I've read so far. I think alot of ppl try to play it safe rather than enjoy life. excellent work.