Wolf
Apprentice
In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends.
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Post by Wolf on Feb 20, 2004 17:50:40 GMT -5
Twilight
Night comes gently, tucking tired earth
into soothing folds of darkness,
leaving quiet and solitude in place
of the bustle of day...
Settling back, softly playing music
for those awake, crickets and bullfrogs
join in pine-scented melody to serenade
night and earth...
A mellow lantern suspended in the sky
casting amber glow to reveal fawn and doe
gliding through the meadow...
A meteor shower sparkles down--
night has smiled,
all is well...
© T. GhostWolf Davidson, August 12, 1972
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amberputis
Virtuoso
~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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Post by amberputis on Feb 21, 2004 1:06:09 GMT -5
again, wonderful write, every piece i read of yours is just fabulous!
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 21, 2004 4:18:02 GMT -5
i agree totally..all of you work is wonderful and this is no exception...very well written...i can hear the music and it's great! good job!
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Post by richie on Feb 21, 2004 4:49:36 GMT -5
I like this very much, wonderfull Imagery great prose, a true sense of place maintained throughout.
regards Richie.
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 21, 2004 22:41:04 GMT -5
Such a beautiful write and reading it just makes me feel happy.  |
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