Wolf
Apprentice
In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends.
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Post by Wolf on Feb 25, 2004 18:22:42 GMT -5
Tears II
...for April<p>
I sense your pain,
and my heart cries--
for I want to help,
yet cannot;
caring,
I search for you,
gently reaching,
concerned,
worried;
you are there,
but then,
you are not;
I feel your withdrawal
into a private world
far from here,
and I want to help,
but,
you are there,
and I am not...
It is such a secret place,
the land of tears...
© T. GhostWolf Davidson, January 16, 1975
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 25, 2004 22:51:28 GMT -5
wonderful sequel...i like this even better than the first...great job...especially liked the last line!
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 27, 2004 23:35:03 GMT -5
I love the final two lines and the flow too. Great write.
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