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Post by SilverEyes on Jan 18, 2004 1:23:59 GMT -5
I can't remember if I've posted this somewhere before...eh.
Voluntary Insomnia
The sun’s long gone
And the moon’s at its peek
Eyes wide open
And every muscle keyed
The radio’s on
Songs spewing through the speakers
And I’m cut off
Gone from the world
I hate so much
Replaced with blissful fantasies
Of a life I used to live
This euphoria fills me
And I feel like I’m floating
The best thing in life is this voluntary insomnia
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Post by bloodredtears on Jan 18, 2004 14:28:03 GMT -5
i really enjoyed this piece a lot...great job...very to the point!
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Post by SilverEyes on Jan 20, 2004 0:07:21 GMT -5
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Post by Sathien on Jan 24, 2004 15:44:47 GMT -5
nicely done! spontaneous and straight to the point. keep up!  |
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Post by SilverEyes on Jan 27, 2004 21:49:41 GMT -5
I'll try. |
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Post by John Barnett on Jan 29, 2004 17:29:37 GMT -5
Yes this was a great piece.
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Post by serenepoetress on Feb 2, 2004 21:48:52 GMT -5
I truly enjoyed reading this work...I found the title was very clever as well...
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Post by richie on Feb 3, 2004 8:35:56 GMT -5
I enjoyed this very much
regards richie.
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Mikhael
Novice
...and love is not a victory march/it's a cold and it's a broken hallelujah...
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Post by Mikhael on Feb 6, 2004 19:43:15 GMT -5
that's kind of sweet. even if it could be considered a nuisance or a waste of time, if something is by choice, it becomes more bearable, personal, like a secret. i like this poem. it's not too wordy, and the ending is nice.
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Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 23, 2004 3:06:15 GMT -5
Excellent write!I enjoyed reading it! ;DJoe
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Eclipse
Apprentice
It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time.
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Post by Eclipse on Feb 23, 2004 15:40:06 GMT -5
i really enjoyed this. it's lines are simple but convey the feelings of something i've tried hard before to express. very nicely done.
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Celestial
Novice
Celestial.Photographer.Poet.
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Post by Celestial on Mar 1, 2004 11:36:44 GMT -5
Insomnia will do this like this to you. Indeed they will. Very to the point. I enjoyed reading this and I understand where you are coming from.  |
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