Celestial
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Post by Celestial on Mar 1, 2004 11:25:55 GMT -5
Gamble Go on Roll the die See what you get
That's all life is One big gamble That results from One roll of the die
So what'll it be? Seven and you're up to Heaven? Or twelve and down to Hell?
It's up to you You make the call Roll the die Let them fall
~ Life's a Gamble ~ By CAB 2004
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Post by bloodredtears on Mar 1, 2004 15:40:46 GMT -5
interesting...the second stanza seemed a little too repetitive..but it still worked well...great job! i like the idea behind it
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Post by SilverEyes on Mar 1, 2004 17:09:51 GMT -5
I like how the speaker seems to be really cocky. I really like the third stanza.
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Celestial
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Post by Celestial on Mar 1, 2004 17:22:44 GMT -5
thanks for the comments
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