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Post by insanepoets on Feb 26, 2004 17:21:13 GMT -5
As I begin another night, ending one more day, I whisper to the twilight the same empty prayer; empty since the passion has drifted from my empty soul. A midnight vulture brings tales of all lost hope, the broken promises, un-kept secrets and illegitimate death; dishonesty, disdain, deceit. Cheaters of lost souls stolen passionately give them away over falied, futile searches. "Dreams, broken and lost, all part of death," he says softly. "And we die everyday." I hear these hopeless words of fear each night, then on a random Tuesday afternoon, with a tilted head and swallowing eyes she looks at me, asking me how I'd slept.
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 27, 2004 19:20:52 GMT -5
welcome to the site...good poem you have here...i can't wait to read more
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 27, 2004 23:44:19 GMT -5
I like the twist ending and the flow that the piece has. Nice write.
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Eclipse
Apprentice
It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time.
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Post by Eclipse on Feb 29, 2004 19:14:20 GMT -5
the ending rocks. really cool piece. welcome to the site. i can't wait to read more. ^.^
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Post by richie on Mar 4, 2004 4:47:59 GMT -5
very powerful great use of words, and content imagery is fine also, well done Richie.
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