Waiting

[Avatre]

Waiting (Originally: Waiting For the Right Moment)

I'm waiting for a rain of hope
Out of this despair
Where every drop is a kind deed
Every splash, a sweet kiss
Each blue bit a little wish
Hoping to come true

I'm waiting for a snow of joy
A way to heal and laugh
Where every snowflake brings happiness
Happiness to the heart
Every drop of ice, a miracle
A miracle come to earth

I'm waiting for a clear, dark night
When I can watch the bright full moon
A quiet night with sleeping silence
Where each second of silence brings wisdom
A little more learning into the world
A beautiful night for wisdom

I'm waiting for a sunny day
A simple sunny day
Where I can sleep in the warmth
And birds sing from every corner
And butterflies dance with the flowers
On a simple sunny day

A/N: Hmm, it's very debatable what this is about, but after a bit of discussion with myself (haha so what if I talk to myself? ^_^) I decided it was mostly about the cleansing power of nature. So be it.

[leash]

beautiful imagery, avatre.. i enjoyed this very much. i like how this piece gave off such a serene atmosphere.

welcome to poet club . i hope to see more from you.

[Avatre]

thanks...i love posting my poems ;D I'm such an arrogant person....ah well. One of my friends is also an excellent writer, I'm sure she'd love it here.

[bloodredtears]

another very good piece...i enjoyed this one alot because you captured your wishes and hopes in it...to me that is what poetry is all about! great job!

[Todd]

Excellent!This is a very well done poem.I've never read anything quite like it.

[SilverEyes]

Very nice, nature does have that power to heal and restore the human soul. I love it.

[amberputis]

I really liked how you fit so many different images of different scenes into one beautiful poem.