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Post by Burning Innocence on Mar 19, 2004 19:58:45 GMT -5
Wounds past finally healed Pieces picked up and put aside Screams drowning into the background Once broken, now put together Why did you put up with this? You believed, pressed forward towards me Still suprised at how well everything fits The fog is finally settling Everything is clear in my eyes I can't see this ending Pulling me, convincing You've spoken truth Brought peace to my soul Calmed my storms Shed some light in the hole I was in I'm still faulty, but patiently you stand I can only anticipate what's next Tears wiped away The heavy baggage you took from me You're so helpful, figuring me out Understanding, as you crawl all over me I'm new in your eyes Can't believe how your staying I know I'm not dreaming Amazing, it's just all too real For once I'm doing something right I've let you in
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Post by bloodredtears on Mar 20, 2004 3:42:20 GMT -5
i love this ending..the whole piece is wonderful...especially this part...great job!
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Post by Persephone on Mar 23, 2004 4:26:55 GMT -5
very optimistic.
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